Saturday, February 12, 2011

I want to write poems that aren't about what happened in my day

On alternate lines. I want them to have structure and

Imagery
Figurative! 
and 



deep 
meanings and allusions to things and have some
kind of rhythm and beat 
happening.

Instead they appear like diary entries 
actually
day planners
that insurance salesmen use 
PICK UP ___ FROM THE AIRPORT
2PM
HOUSE VIEWING
12.15PM
WORK
WORK
WORK
WORK

The courier didn't come today. 
Or yesterday.

Will call tomorrow.

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